Korrekturen:
- many adults says => adults = Plural, also many adults say; adolescence ; and adults often explains => adults = Plural, also adults explain
- But is that really true?
- Is adolescence the best time of life?
- First of all, teenager can gain experience because they´re young.
- There are several reasons for this, one of them is that they can get the second chance when they made a bad decision so they´re not repeating the same mistake twice.
- Another significant point is that teenager have a lot of time to develop their hobby or to make new friends.
- Moreover teenager don´t have many liabilities because their parents => parents = Plural, also many parentssupport ;them.
- Let me give you an example: When teenager maybe get into trouble their parents help them or when they need somebody to talk to then they can talk with their parents.
- All in all you can say that adolescence is the best time in life or maybe the best period of life because as an adolescent you have a lot of time to find yourself
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