Die Fehler hat mir mein Lehrer unterstrichen, nun soll ich sie verbessern.
Die Fehler sind entweder fett markiert oder unterstrichen.
Danke schonmal für eure Hilfe! 
Text 1
1. Lucy played a role in all of his dreams, and did not let sleep him.
2. But every year, when Lucy would celebrate her birthday, he comes to her grave. -> Stil
3. He has not forgotten Lucy, and would never forget her.
Text 2
1. I do not know what I should do.
2. But after we have went to the doctor, Mum and I talked about different options.
3. We talked a long time, and Mum meant that she would abort it in my situation.
4. But she also meant that it is my decision, if I would get the baby.
5. I do not want to kill the baby, because it's the guilt of me and Sam, not the guilt of the baby.
6. It would live in a familiy that takes care for him or her.
7. If i would give up the baby for adoption, I could see it whenever I want.
Vielen Dank für's Lesen & Korrigieren. Einige Fehler habe ich schon gefunden, aber bei denen bin ich mir absolut unsicher.