Dankeschön für die Korrektur. Wusste gar nicht das ich so schlecht im grammatikalischen bin ..^^
Aba hab da noch einen text auch über einen Urlaub. Nur zur sicherheit damit ich mich dann für das ein oder andere Entscheiden kann. Was mir besser liegt.
Könnte mir das jemand auch nochmal korrigieren? 
Mallorca
Now i´m going to tell you something about my holidays in Mallorca.
When i was 11 years old, i´ve already been in Mallorca.
We flew by plane. That was the first flight for me.
Firstly i was very affraid from it but in the plane i calmed down. When we´ve arrived the island we went to a hotel. There we lived 10 days. Outside the hotel there was a big swimming pool. And near from it there was the sea.
The beach from the sea was very great and the weather was nice.
But i didn´t swam in the sea. I only swam in the swimming pool, it was cleaner.
After 2 days i met a girl. I had a lot of fun with her. But we had a problem because she was french and she couldn´t speak German. Although she can´t it we were friends. Then after 7 days she must went home. We´ve already changed our adresses. I was very sad when we went home but that were the best holidays for me.