Beiträge von KleineFrage

  • Brauche Kritik zu meinen Sätzen ;-)

    Halli hallo,

    ich soll einen Text schreiben im englischen über "UK cities hit by riots" (wir haben dazu ein Blatt bekommen):

    Könntet ihr bitte ein wenig meinen Text kritisieren und Verbesserungsmöglichkeiten geben (falls euch welche einfallen)?

    Danke! ;)


    All things began with the death of Mark Duggan. This one was killed after a peaceful protest by firearms of an officer in Tottenham.
    The consequence was that cars and houses were set in fire. But this was just a part of the cause for the reaction, in the reality the most persons which set things in fire, were young people like teenage students or young fathers or people with regular jobs or unemployed youths, had not got any perspective.
    In this wave of events which extend over London, Manchester, Liverpool, Birmingham and Bristol were held in four nights 2,275 people.