Hey.
Ich schreibe übermorgen eine Arbeit über u.a. Bildbeschreibungen. Das ist ds einzige wo ich mir unsicher bin.
Es geht um folgendes Bild:
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_f6429bFEO9U/T…ldier+black.jpg
Ich übe mit einem Freund, hier mein Text, dann seiner:
In the picture I can see a soldier who is wearing a helmet. He is crying. His face looks very frightened. Tears drop down his face. Maybe he is at war. I think his family dies or hies buddy. Perhaps the brutality and the murderers damage him mentaly.
Seiner:
In the picture you can see a soldier, he wear a helmet fron the army. He cries, and the water driped down his face. He is coloured black. Maybe he is sad, because he had lose a friend or his family. I think he is fighting in a war, and must kill other people.
Das war sein Text.
Bitte um Hilfe.
Danke im Vorraus.
MaxRoxx