Hallo zusammen, hätte jemand Zeit und Lust meinen Englisch Text zu korrigieren? wäre um jede Unterstüzung froh.
Alcohol is a ban. Is it correct? Many people have a big problem with drinking too much alcohol.
What can we do for another opinion? Can we increase the older for legal alcohol consumption, or should we forbid drinking alcohol? Everyone will do her own experience they don’t listen of their parents or the government. The fact is young adults listen to their friends, because of that, it`s important that they have an intact social network.
The reason, why drink peoples so much liquor? For a lot of teenagers is the life hart, stressful and full of uncertainly questions.