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Bei diesen aufgaben handelt es sich alles um diesen text
http://teenink.com/college_guide/…espearean-Prep/

1) What objective facts do you learn about the author's life?
She discovered her attitude towards acting during her school time.. He describes that she is the only Mexican who dislikes the mexican food. They love the theater. Because of this he lost many friends. She loves Shakespeare and they do any party with the design of Shakespeare or during car rides or dinner parties. Her normal friends don't accept that she is a drama queen. But because of that reason he found new friends who accept him as he is. . The author felt more comfortable with him belonging to the new group. They spend their time with girl ''who lunch''.

2.) Outline what she says about her emotional life!

The author says about her emotional life that she was very lonely as they say that she is a drama queen . His friends deserted him because he is not a normal guy. His friends don't accept his theatrical tendencies. He loves Shakespeare. In high-school they began a new life. He found a new group ,they accepted him as he is. He fell more comfortable in his new own skin. But the important thing is that he found himself.

3.)Analyse language and style of the article!

In the text that was written by Jasmin C. ,, A Shakespeare-Prep'' is about a guy who find himself and began a new life.
The author of this uses lots of chiasmus ,, i am (line(l) 1.f) and ,,i am (l.2).
In (l.2) they us a similie, an explicit comparisson between two distinctly different things which have at least one feature in common ,, as night and day''. In the next paragraph he uses a alliteration, a recurrence of initial sounds. The authors effect of the aliterations is to convey auditory images.
At (l 15-27) the author uses much of chiasms. The effect of this is that he describes only one person and that the person stands in center.

4.) Literature like Shakespeare's dramas may contribute to your personal development -discuss-!

Shakespeare is one of the first great dramatists. Although his works has survived incomplete, thanks to him some of the big tragedies of history. He was active in all literary genres. Particular his romantic tragedies (Romeo and Julia) and his comedies are very exciting, the story takes places (king Lear) given interesting insight into the living conditions read at the courting the time of Shakespeare. He is really impressed me was how it manuges Shakespeare historical material (the drama king) pocked in great poetry. In my opinion he is the first writer who is not satisfied with a description of the unviable people but also the examination of the emotional lives of his characters.
Shakespeare’s language is strange even for the English of his days but then again the most scripts we have today are recreations based on memories of actors and the audience , but this fact doesn't really want to appear as an excuse in my mind it even lets the Shakespeare ''fans'' who are always quoting his crap seem rather ridiculous because they actually gabble some words that probably never ever left Shakespeare’s mouth.
He wasn't able to write his name properly and left out the second. The excuse for his curiosity still is the instability of the English language that days but I expect move of a winnable genius of language and poetry .

Ich danke Ihnen für ihre Antwort
ich habe die ersten 3 aufgaben nochmal überarbeitet
könnten Sie da bitte nochmal drüber schauen

1) What objective facts do you learn about the author`s life?
She discovered her attitude towards acting during her school time.. He describes that she is the only Mexican who dislikes mexican food. They loves the theater. Because of this he has lost many friends. She loves Shakespeare and they do any party with the design of Shakespeare or during car rides or dinner parties. Her normal friends don`t accept that she is a drama queen. But because of that reason he has found new friends who accept him as he is. . The author feels more comfortable with him belonging to the new group. They spend their time with girl ``who lunch``.

2.) Outline what she says about her emotional life!

The author says about her emotional life that she was very lonely as they say that she is a drama queen. Her friends deserted her because she is not a normal girl. Her friends don`t accept her theatrical tendencies. She loves Shakespeare. In high-school they began a new life. She found a new group ,they accepted her as she is. She felt more comfortable in her new own skin. But the important thing was that she found himself.

3.)Analyse language and style of the article!

The text that was written by Jasmin C. ,, A Shakespeare-Prep`` is about finding himself and beginning a new life.
The author uses lots of chiasmus ,, i am (line(l) 1.f) and ,,i am (l.2).
In (l.2) they us a similie, an explicit comparisson between two distinctly different things which have at least one feature in common ,, as night and day``. In the next paragraph she uses a alliteration, a recurrence of initial sounds. The author`s effect of the aliterations is to convey auditory images.
At (l 15-27) the author uses much of chiasmi. The effect of this is that he describes only one person and that the person stands in center.