Hallo Leute,
Morgen schreibe ich eine Arbeit und wir müssen einen Text schreiben das Thema ist: Eine Woche in Kalifornien und ich bin mir nie sicher ob ich die Vergangenheit oder grammatik richtig geschrieben hab und dies ist mein Text:
On my vacation I was with my parents for a week in California. On Sunday we flew to the San Francisco airport. On Monday we arrived San Francisco. My father rent a car, we would drive over the highway 101. But first we drove to the Golden Gate Bridge , later we drove to the highway 101.We would drive to Los Angeles. We parked by a Farm and bought lots of strawberries, later we drove futher. We drove 3 days over the highway 101 and slept in motels. As we arrived Los Angeles our hotel.We went to the city and bought clothes, in the evening we went to a resturant. On the next day we went to the beach we had lots of fun in the water.Later we went to the walk of fame. I saw many stars but i had not become autographs or photos.On the last day we drove to the Disney land, we had lots of funny nice attractions ,and many film stars Mickey mouse, Donald Duck and more.On the next day we drove to the Los Angeles airport and flew back to Germany.
Helft mir bitte und wenn ihr den verbessern könnt bitte macht es weil ich bin mir nie sicher und ich brauche eine Gute Note weil ich die Letzte arbeit schlecht geschrieben hab weil mein letzter text nicht gut war 