Comment!!?!?

  • Und zwar schreibe ich nächste Woche eine englisch Klausur , wo wir einen comment verfassen müssen.
    Könnte bitte jemand meinen comment korrigieren und schreiben was ich falsch gemacht habe.
    Danke.

    "Comment on the problem between parents and teenagers and how to solve them."


    Nowadays their are big problems between parents and teenagers
    but how schould we solve them ?

    I think it's normal that sometimes parents and teenagers just have big conflicts
    about a theme. Both sides have often seperate opinions and it's hard to come
    on one conclusion . You can solve problems if you sit together and discuss about it, in my opinion
    it's the best solution you can do. But its also important that teenagers should listen to their
    parents what they want to say, what is a big problem.

    All in all I would say that teenagers and parents should talk clearly about
    the problem , so they will come to conclusion.