E-Mail Korrektur/Verbesserung

  • Hallo Leute! Könnet ihr bitte diese E-Mail, falls nötig, korrigieren oder könnte man etwas besser formulieren?

    Dear Mr xx,

    With reference to our telephone conversation I inform you that the time of my placement is 24.06. - 05.07.2013. Should I send my application and the Cv to your company now or at a later date? Thank you for your patience and cooperation. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Best regards,
    xy