Hallo
Ich habe im Fach Englisch 2 Hausarbeiten zur Bearbeitung in die Hand bekommen,wo ich hier hoffe ,das ich vlt noch ein paar Anmerkungen,eventuell Fehler in meinem Text beheben könnte.
In der Ersten Hausarbeit sollte ein Text ueber "my best winter holiday" verfasst werde.
Text 1
The best winter holiday I have ever had was in Lech Zürs with my parents and my brother.In our 4 star hotel we had a lot of entertainment which we tried so far we could.Every single day during our
winter holiday we enjoyed skying and snowboarding.Other activities like snowshoe hikinh and cross-country skying we only tried once.We also had trips to Tirol,Vorarlberg,Burgenland and Salzburg which
was pretty interesting to see the winter landcapes and the famous cities there.The special on this trip was that we used every single day the beauty and wellness offer to relax our sour muscles and
with the meaning.
In der Zweiten Hausarbeit ging es darum einen Text ueber "lost in a strange town /foreign country"
Text 2
Lost in a strange country is connected with fear ,despair because of the situation.If I would be lost in a foreign country maybe without no knowledge of the language I would try to get in contact
with other people.Also I should try to call my hotel which could me help out off that situation.There are many other opportunities like call the police ask them for help.One of the best way would be
using your travel map to get to a safe place where you are able to contact other people.You always should make sure before you leave the erea of a foreign country that you carry a travel map with
you ,some money to call the police with and enough information about the place where you are living at this time.
Ich wuerde mich freuen ,wenn Fehler ect angesprochen werden ,sodass ich durch eurer Wissen meine Schwachpunkte in diesen Texten beheben kann.
Liebe Grüße Dave