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    Anouk musste mit ansehen, wie ihr Vater von Räubern erschossen wurde.
    Anouk had to watch, how her father was shot dead by robbers.

    Aufgrund der hohen Kriminalitätsrate in Südafrika hatte ihr Vater hatte vor ein paar Monaten eine hohe Mauer gebaut um seine Familie zu schützen, doch auch diese hielt die Räuber nicht vor dem Überfall ab.
    Because of the high criminal rate in south africa her father had built a few month before a verry high wall to protect his family, but this fact not bar the robbers from their attack.

    Anouk wurde von dem Hausmädchen während des Überfalls versteckt, doch sie musste alles mit ansehen, wie das Blut ihres Vaters auf den Teppich lief und auch das ihre Mutter verletzt wurde. Seitdem spricht sie nicht mehr.
    Anouk was pushed down behind the kitchen door by their maid, but she had to see all horrible things: how the blood of her father stained the Persian carpet and how her mother was seriously wounded. Since this moment she doesn't speak.

    Danke schomal :)

    Anouk had to watch her father being shot dead by robbers.
    Because of the high crime rate in South Africa her father had built a very high wall a few months before to protect his family, but even that did not prevent the robbers from attacking.
    During the attack Anouk was hidden by the maid, but she had to see all the horrible things: the blood of her father being shed on the carpet and her mother being wounded. From that moment on she has not spoken a word.