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  • Diversity in the USA

    The core standards of America are founded, in principle, on the basis of its diversity, equality and versatility among citizens. Beginning with its Declaration of Independence, the United States distinguished itself from other modern nation-states by establishing a country of men who were different but equal. E Pluribus Unum was originally intended to be both a representation of the union of the thirteen colonies and an expression of the United States as a country formed by immigrants of many different backgrounds. Today, in the 21st century, many things have changed drastically.
    In earlier times, people would forsake their homeland and moved to America for various reasons. From the first group of pilgrims that landed at Plymouth Rock, to the thousands that immigrate to America every year, they all believed in the same dream that the pilgrims had when they came to America. The American Dream was that no matter what their standard, racial, religious, or social background and beliefs were they could find wealth and happiness in America. And that they always have an opportunity to work hard in order to get to a higher position in life. Moreover, America has been like a melting pot in some ways, and a tossed salad in other ways. Each immigrant brought some of his homeland's culture with him, and some parts of his culture melt with others, and some stayed intact, like all of the different pieces of a salad.
    But, in the past decade Terrorism has brought many issues concerning immigration to the forefront of American concerns. Many strict laws against immigration have been passed in order to slow the waves of immigration. Furthermore, in these 10 years America has lost much, in terms of lives, treasure and reputation. Most of all, perhaps, it has lost its illusions. One, that its home territory was invulnerable, beyond the reach of hostile foreigners, vanished on that terrible Day. But then in 2008, the worst financial crisis since the Great Depression caused the disappearing of another no less cherished illusion as well: the certainty that whatever happened in the world beyond, America was a place of infinite opportunity and ever-growing prosperity. Today’s generation in the USA has to start to realize that they may be the first in their country's history to not achieve the level of financial success that their parents did. Now, given the state of the economy and America's weakening global position, achieving personal wealth is no longer at the root of the American dream.

    Einmal editiert, zuletzt von Dream_High (9. März 2012 um 04:52)

  • @ Dream_High.... your high flying dreams won't last very long: you'll end in a formidable, thunderous crash if you don't stick to the rules of essay writing: I conceed that you are more cunning and dexterous in hiding the sources of your text than most of the users in this forum. However, as long as you don't identify the passages you've copied, you'll undergo the same fate as our beloved Freiher von und zu G.

    after 5 minutes of reserach I found the following links which you suppressed:

    http://www.essayforum.com/writing-feedba…lting-pot-2579/

    http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboar…ress=103x626138

    http://oregonhumanities.org/magazine/issue…ter-2011-encore

    http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curricul…99.03.01.x.html

    Einmal editiert, zuletzt von what'sup (9. März 2012 um 10:54)