summary korrektur bitte :)

    hier mein englisch text vllt kan ja jmd eine korrektur durchführen wäre echt nett :)

    The text „ Mud-Hut-rat“ is published in the sun and written by Hilary Douglas is about a women who fall in love with his riding master at a trip with her family.
    On a trip with her family to west Gambia Sandra Anderson, 39 years old, meets bakery a riding master and fall in love with him. She decides to leave her old life behind her and live with him in west Gambia. Bakary is a poor man, who tries to earn his money with riding lessons for tourists and lives under ratios in poor in a mud-hat. After the trip Sandra takes 6000 pounds and moved back to him and lives there together with him.

    Hi! ich schreibe dir meine Korrektur mit meinen Bemerkungen!

    The article „ Mud-Hut-rat“ was published in the Sun by Hilary Douglas. It is about a woman who falls in love with her riding master during a trip with her family.
    On a trip with her family to west Gambia, Sandra Anderson, 39 years old, meets bakery a riding master and falls in love with him. She decides to leave her old life behind her and live with him in west Gambia. Bakary is a poor man, who tries to earn his money with riding lessons for tourists. He lives poorly in a mud-hat. After the trip Sandra takes 6000 pounds and comes back to him.


    p.s. Wenn man etwas in den Zeitungen liest und danach eine Zusammenfassung schreibt, ist es besser "article" statt "text" zu schreiben. War es auch "Mud-Hat-rat" geschrieben oder "Mud-Hut-Rat"?
    The Sun - es ist eine englische Zeitung, deswegen schreibt man immer Groß!
    Falls du alles im Präsens schreiben willst, dann immer im Präsens!
    Bakary oder bakery? Ist es eine Name?
    Am Ende habe ich nicht verstanden: von wem hat Sandra 6000 pounds genommen?


    Ich hoffe, ich habe Dir geholfen :)