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    Hallo Leute! Bitte korregiert mal meinen Text. Danke! Die großgeschriebenen Wörter musste ich ergänzen!
    Ich soll diese Wörter in der richtigen Form einsetzen!

    So, Katrin, have you got any special plans for the weekend?
    Yes, I have, actually. My parents CAME (come) to England.
    Oh, really. For how long?
    Well, they ARRIVED (arrive) on Friday and STAYING (stay) until Wednesday. They booked the tickets months ago.
    I expect that DIDN´T NOT (be) nice. When did you last see them?
    Oh, about three months ago. Quite a long time, so I don´t think we STOPED (stop) talking the whole time.
    Are, they FLYING (fly) to London, so we SPENDING (spend) the weekend there in a hotel.
    Wow, that GIVED (give) you and your mum a break from the cooking!
    Exactly! Of course we DOES (do) some sightseeing-maybe we TAKING ( take) one of those double decker buses; they stop at all the interesting places, and then I want to take them to a show on Saturday evening. I haven´t got any tickets yet but I LOOKED (look) in the Internet.
    My sister saw a really good show when she was in London last month.
    Oh? Can you remember the name?
    No, I can´t; that´s the problem. I PHONING (phone) her and then I NOT GET BACK (get back) to you later.
    Thanks. And on Sunday maybe we WENT (go) for a walk in Hyde Park or WENT (go) on a beat on the river.
    And there´s always shopping.
    That´s true but they can do that in Peterborough.
    We CAME (come) back here on Sunday evening. Michael COOKS (cook) a special meal.
    That´s a nice idea. What about the last two days?
    Well, I don´t have andy holiday, so I DIDN´T NOT (be) at work. I hope they DIDN´T NOT (be) bored.
    Surely not. There´s lots to do Peterborough and you can see them in the evenings. I´m sure they HAS (have) a lovely time.

    So, Katrin, have you got any special plans for the weekend?
    Yes, I have, actually. My parents WILL COME(come) to England.
    Oh, really. For how long?
    Well, they WILL ARRIVE (arrive) on Friday and WILL STAY (stay) until Wednesday. They booked the tickets months ago.
    I expect that WILL BE(be) nice. When did you last see them?
    Oh, about three months ago. Quite a long time, so I don´t think we WILL STOP (stop) talking the whole time.
    They WILL FLY (fly) to London, so we WILL SPEND (spend) the weekend there in a hotel.
    Wow, that WILL GIVE (give) you and your mum a break from the cooking!
    Exactly! Of course we WILL DO(do) some sightseeing-maybe we WILL TAKE( take) one of those double decker buses; they stop at all the interesting places, and then I want to take them to a show on Saturday evening. I haven´t got any tickets yet but I will(look) in the Internet.
    My sister saw a really good show when she was in London last month.
    Oh? Can you remember the name?
    No, I can´t; that´s the problem. I WILL PHONE (phone) her and then I WILL GET BACK (get back) to you later.
    Thanks. And on Sunday maybe we WILL GO (go) for a walk in Hyde Park or GO (go) on a boat on the river.
    And there´s always shopping.
    That´s true but they can do that in Peterborough.
    We WILL COME (come) back here on Sunday evening. Michael WILL(cook) a special meal.
    That´s a nice idea. What about the last two days?
    Well, I don´t have any holiday, so I WILL BE (be) at work. I hope they WILL NOT BE(be) bored.
    Surely not. There´s lots to do and you can see them in the evenings. I´m sure they WILL HAVE(have) a lovely time.

    The first part, published in 1993 and was produced by Steven Spielberg, is about a millionaire named John Hammond, who want on a desert island, close to Costa Rica to open an amusement park. He and his team had managed to extract from mosquitoes fossilized dinosaur DNA and revive with the help of technology, these extinct creatures.
    Shortly before the opening of the park, however, there is an accident, after which investors demand the appraisal of experts and that they then give their opinion on the safety that are critical about the future of the Jurassic Park.
    These leading paleontologists visited Hammond and his friend Dr. Sattler. These two, the chaos theorist Ian Malcolm, and a representative of the investor Donald Gennaro and grandchildren Hammonds are the first visitors to Dino Park
    But a saboteur safety systems overrides. Then break out the dinosaurs, they are beyond any control and begin a hunt for the visitors in the park and its creators.


    ist das richtig?

    Liebe Luise,

    bitte mach für neue Problemstellungen immer einen neuen Thread auf!

    Zitat von Luise

    The first part, published in 1993 and produced by Steven Spielberg, is about a millionaire named John Hammond, who wants to open an amusement park on a desert island, close to Costa Rica. He and his team have managed to extract fossilized dinosaur DNA from mosquitoes and revive these extinct creatures with the help of technology.
    Shortly before the opening of the park, however, there is an accident, after which investors demand an appraisal done by experts. They are to give their opinion on the safety which is critical about the future of the Jurassic Park.
    These leading paleontologists visit Hammond and his friend Dr. Sattler. These two, the chaos theorist Ian Malcolm, and a representative of the investor Donald Gennaro as well as Hammonds grandchildren are the first visitors to Dino Park.
    But a saboteur overrides safety systems. Then the dinosaurs break out, they are beyond any control and begin a hunt for the visitors in the park and its creators.

    Korrekturen in fett.

    Generell scheinst du ein Problem mit der Satzstellung im Englischen zu haben. Die grundlegende Satzstellung ist immer: Subjekt (WER) - Prädikat (TUT WAS) - Objekt (WOMIT/WO/WANN etc.). Dabei kannst du das Objekt nicht wie im Deutschen zwischen Teile des Prädikats stellen. Die Teile des Verbs müssen immer zusammenhängen.
    Beispiel: Deutsch - Ich werde dich finden (Subjekt - Verbteil1 - Objekt - Verbteil2) vs. Englisch - I will find you (Subjekt - Verbteil1 - Verbteil2 - Objekt)

    entschuldigung aber wie macht man so etwas auf?diesen thread?

    sind sie sich auch wirklich sicher das das richtig ist?nur mal eine frage wieso heißt es im 1. satz nicht was .....?

    trotzdem danke ich sehr

    schönen abend noch!

    Ja, ich bin mir sicher, dass das so richtig ist ;) Da steht nicht was, weil es sich bei dem Teil zwischen den Kommata um einen Einschub/eine Apposition handelt. In Deutsch etwa: "Der erste Teil, veröffentlicht 1993 und produziert von Steven Spielberg, ist..." Da steht ja auch kein Verb im Einschub, ne? :)

    Ein Thread ist ein Thema und das machst du neu auf, indem du in der Forenübersicht oben auf "Thema erstellen" klickst.

    AW: Textkorrektur

    Hallo, ich bräuchte einmal Hilfe bei den Future Formen. Ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob der present-progressive immer die richtige Form ist o. doch eher will-future genommen werden sollte.


    1. My parents are coming (come) to England.

    2. Well, they are arriving (arrive) on Friday and are staying (stay) until Wednesday. They booked the tickets month ago.

    3. Yes, they are flying (fly) to London so we will spend (spend) the weekend there in a hotel.

    4. We are coming (come) back here on Sunday evening. Michael will cook (cook) a special meal.

    Danke im voraus!