Hallo Ihr Lieben,
ich muss bis morgen eine Compositition schreiben und hab das Ganze gerade ausformuliert. Da ich die letzte Zeit irgendwie das Talent entwickelt habe immer wieder an der Themafrage vorbeizuschreiben, d.h. das Thema zu verfehlen und entsprechend den Lehrer nicht begeistert habe, fände Ich es toll wenn sich jmd. der sehr gut in Englisch ist, den folgenden Text mal durchlesen könnte und ggf. Verbesserugnsvorschläge macht.
"The general public must become aware of the ecological advantages of biodegradable substances over products which decompose either very slowly or not at all.
Products which are made from biodegradable substances can be changed to a harmless natural state by the action of bacteria. Do the advantages of biodegradable substances outweigh the disadvantages of conventionally produced products?
I definitely think biodegradable substances will become more important in the future because they don't pollute the environment as much as conventional products. As an example take bioplastic. Bioplastic is made from renewable raw materials and is therefore already in the production very environmentally friendly. Bioplastic is compostable after his usage. With the help of microorganisms, the bioplastic decomposes into its natural components. In comparison , conventional plastic which is based on mineral oil decomposes only very slowly.
Furthermore even lube oils can be manufactured from biodegradable substances.
As an example oils which have the quality mark “Blauer Engel” are made of biogradable substances.
Such lubricants are often made of animal or vegetable matter and therefore these products don’t burden the environment so much. Normal oils are producing even more CO2 in the fabrication
and pollute the environment for years if they are not professional disposed.
Personally, I believe that biodegradable substances are a good way to protect the environment. They outweigh the disadvantages of conventional products like oil or plastic and are sometimes even less complicated to manufacture. "
Vielen Dank für eure Hilfe! 
LG