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There will₁ still be misunderstandings but she really hopes nothing like that will ever happen to them again.
There, the people used to leave their doors open because there was nothing worth stealing but there were not so many criminals, too.
It really annoys him that <->₂ the people who he likes best always die in the films he watches.
Losing a beloved person is one of the worst things that can happen to you.
She never felt sorry for him.
Until then, I had always had the feeling there was no friendship between them.
Memories cannot only₃ but also help₄ to get over whatever had happened to you.
She believed₅ he would feel even sorrier.
It will not bring her back to life if he insists on the opposite.
Perhaps, he wanted Ellen to write about what had happened to her, because he thought it would₆ help her to break₇ with the past.
Members of the upper classes should also read her essay because she intended that people see things with different eyes.

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1 - Hier wäre ein anderes Modalverb besser, z.B. "could" oder "might".
2 - Adverbien können nicht einfach an einer beliebigen Stelle stehen. "Always" gehört zu den Adverbien, die im Prädikat stehen müssen.
3 - Cannot only WAS? Da fehlt eindeutig etwas.
4 - WEM helfen? Hier fehlt die Person.
5 - Would ist die Simple-Past-Form von will, die lediglich die Aufgabe des Subjunctive übernimmt. Deshalb kann es hier nicht direkt mit einem Simple Present kombiniert werden.
6 - Hier gilt das gleiche wie bei 5, allerdings bestimmt hier "thought" die Zeitform. Denn das "would help" ist "thought" von der Bedeutung her untergeordnet.
7 - "Come to terms" fände ich sinnvoller.

"...whatever has happened to you.",