Englisch text / Bitte Fehler korigieren ;)

  • Hey, wäre super nett wenn ihr mir bei meinen Fehlern helfen und diese korregieren könntet :P

    The migrant family

    I’m today by an migrant family. Mrs. Morale has got 3 children. Her husband died last year by a car crash. The children names are Diego, Luis and Maria. Today, I’m talking with her about her story.

    Me: Mrs. Morale, why do live in the USA?

    Mrs. Morale: Me and my family had live in Mexico. We were very poor because no one fined a job. Sometimes we haven’t enough to eat. It was vary hard. Then I meet my later husband. We married when I was 16 and he was 17. We was very happy. But he doesn’t find a job too. We bough know: It can’t go on like this. When I was 17 and he was 18 we went to the USA.

    Me: How do you done it?

    Mrs: Morale: My husband, I and some others peoples must paid a man, I think he was from the border patrol, a lot of money and he told us how we can get over the border. Then we cross the border. Everyone was very quiet because we heard a truck from the border patrol .We hide behind a rock. Everyone was very careful and quiet. The Truck stops and we can heard steps. But one minute later the truck drives away. At the next time we have do day jobs. But then the President give all illegal Immigrates a amnesty. We’ve find real jobs and have buy a house. Now we are legal immigrants. And then my children was born. We were very happy but then my husband died by a car crash.
    Thanks, Mrs. Morale for this interview.
    Thanks, goodbye.

    Mr_Dingens:-D

  • Also du hast zimliche Probleme mit den Verben und dem Tempus.
    Du solltest alle Formen von "be" nochmals wiederholen und vorallem das "simple past"!
    Z.B. ist die simple past-form von find nicht fined sondern found! und das heißt auch nicht we was sondern we were!
    Ich wünsch dir viel Glück und hoffe das du das wiederholst!:)
    P.S.: Ich bin kein Lehrer! Das lernt man schon in der 5.Klasse!

  • Also du hast zimliche Probleme mit den Verben und dem Tempus. Du solltest alle Formen von "be" nochmals wiederholen und vorallem das "simple past"! Z.B. ist die simple past-form von find nicht fined sondern found! und das heißt auch nicht we was sondern we were! Ich wünsch dir viel Glück und hoffe das du das wiederholst! P.S.: Ich bin kein Lehrer! Das lernt man schon in der 5.Klasse!