Hallo,
wir mussten in Englisch eine "Opinion" zu "Multicalturalism" (multi-cultural society) schreiben. Ich hab da mal so angefangen:
I think a multi-cultural society is a good idea to learn from other cultures. This new society would unite all different societies in each country on earth. But this can not work if people are racist or have prejudices against foreingers. Furthermore difficulties could arise when laws conflict, be they relegious laws of just customs and that are respected by some and abhored of others. However, countries with a multi-cultural society will need strong government and unambigous laws to work peacefully to enrich one anothers's culture rather than to pull down. I think also that it requires balance and strong policing so that a multculturalism country can function well for all involved.
Könnte bitte jemand das mal auf Fehler und unverständliche Textstellen untersuchen, plz. Ich brauch das ziemlich bald 
Danke in voraus...