Englisch Summary Bitte Korrektur ^!!!!!!!

Kan jemand drübergucken ^^were super Danke im Voraus
Summary the best man on the Bus

The first section of the story describes Lyle Morgan while he was sitting at night in a long distance bus with a young couple that is whispering loudly to each other.

In the second section of the story Lyle looked at his own reflection in the glass window and he remembered the hart times as he left home with his young wife.

In the third section of the story Lyle heared the dialogue between the couple that is about Sandy's difficult parents and he realize the problem of the couple.

In the third section of the story the police stop the bus and two policemen came into the bus and Lyle start to defend the couple.

In the last section of the story Lyle finds out that it was a misunderstanding and the couple thanks him after that the bus drives on.

wo sind den die Fehler. bei den Sätzen.?? Ist der 3 Satz hier richtig oder wie sollte es klingen ?
ich hab den dritten teil nochma verbessert.
In the third section of the story the police stop the bus and two policeman came into the bus, than Lyle starts to defend the couple and he pretends that he is Paul's best Man.

Also wegen den Zeiten hab da gerade nen problem was ist den Falsch?

Hab nochma die Sätze versucht zu verbessern:
Wen etwas nicht richtig ist bitte verbessern.brauch den Text schon für morgen.
Summary the best man on the Bus

The first section of the story describes Lyle Morgan while he was sitting at night in a long distance bus with a young couple that is whispering loudly to each other.

In the second section of the story Lyle looks at his own reflection in the glass window and he remembers the hard time as he left home with his young wife.

In the third section of the story Lyle hears the dialogue between the couple that is about Sandy's difficult parents and he realize the problem of the couple.

In the fourth section of the story the police stop the bus and two policemen came into the bus, than Lyle starts to defend the couple and he pretends that he is Paul's best man,because he does not want that Sandy's parents disturb the relationship of the young couple.

In the last section of the story Lyle finds out that it was a misunderstanding and the couple thanks him after that the bus drives on.

heißt es lookes oder is lokking at his own reflektion ?