Englisch Hausaufgaben Hilfe // Characterization

Hallo,
Ich muss bis morgen eine Englisch Characterisierung schreiben und bin leider nicht dabei der beste
Vielleicht könntet ihr schnell drüberfliegen und Fehler raussuchen.
Niveau 12 Klasse^^
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Cornelius J. Holingsworth is a Jewish immigrant from Russia.
He arrives from Minsk-Pinsk to New York and sells there bananas now.
His old job was shoe maker.
In order that, he earns enough money to survive.
He wears a vest, collarless shirt and baggy pants.
He gives Shimmel Shitzman the chance to work with him and be partners,
that shows that he could be helpful. He gives him this chance because he felt sorry with his destiny. So he has a heart of gold.
Nevertheless he is arrogant when he don´t want to talk with Shimmel Shitzman because he is not a politician etc.
Also he is unsympathetic when he talks behind the newspaper. Furthermore he is a bit conceited when he says that all flower girls are blind in this country.
Anyway he is an Crawford when he present Maggie flowers and claims that he would be a famous music producer. Moreover he is smart-aleck when he simply says ,,welcome to America”.
All in all the reader learns about him an arrogant but sometimes friendly guy who is helpful and generous.

Gruß Julian,
Danke schonmal!

Here you go:
The question marks are where I had no idea of what you meant!

---Native Speaker

Cornelius J. Holingsworth is a Jewish immigrant from Russia.
He immigrated from Minsk-Pinsk to New York and now sells bananas there.
His old job was as a shoe maker.
????In order that, he earns enough money to survive.?????
He wears a vest, collarless shirt and baggy pants.
He gives Shimmel Shitzman the chance to work with him and be partners, which shows that he can be helpful. He gives him this chance because he was concerned about his future. He really does haave a heart of gold.
Nevertheless he is arrogant when he doesn't want to talk with Shimmel Shitzman because he is not a politician etc.
He is also unsympathetic when he talks behind the newspaper. Furthermore he is a bit conceited when he says that all flower girls are blind in this country.
Anyway, he is a ?Crawford? when he presents Maggie flowers and claims that he will be a famous music producer. Moreover he is smart-aleck when he simply says ,,welcome to America”.
All in all the reader learns that he is rather arrogant but sometimes a friendly guy who can be helpful and generous.