...Tariq wants to break out, but he can't because he has to do what his parents say. One day later, George is angry about Meenah, she wears her school- uniform at home, a skirt. He shout at her that she has to wear the sari of/from her aunt from Pakistan. If not now- then on sunday!
In the evenings Tariq wants to talk with his father about the marriage. He reveals that he doesn't want to marry a woman he doesn't know! He says he feels English and he speaks just English and no Urdu. As/ When George heares this, he lose his control and goes ...Tariq wants to break out, but he can't because he have to do what his parents say. One day later, George is angry about Meenah, she wears her school- uniform at home, a skirt. He shout at her that she has to wear the sari of/from her aunt from Pakistan. If not now- then on sunday!
In the evenings Tariq wants to talk with his father about the marriage. He reveals that he doesn't want to marry a woman he doesn't love! He says he feels English and he speaks just English and no Urdu. When George heares this, he loses his control and goes with a knife on the throat of Tariq. He says he has to do what he says. This marriage is for the familiy! He argues (that) English woman were bad, they drunk alcohol and smoke cigarettes... Thus Tariq agrees with his father. And so George moves backwards with the knife in his hands... But Tariq asks him provokingly why he has married an English woman!? George looks furios, so Tariq says fast (that) he will marry the Pakistani girl and after this he want to marry an English woman he loves, like his fahter!
Sunday. The Familiy from Bradford arrives. The whole Khan- familiy is toffed up. But there is a very tensely Situation between the two families. Everybody knows that the two daughters are very ugly and they don't know exactly about what to talk. So there come little missunderstandings about Sajid and the house... The Shah- Family want that Abdul and Tariq live in their house. Meanwhile Meenah, Sajid and Saleem talk about the ugly girls, and everybody heares it. Ella want to have a look for them and goes in the other room. There Saleem shows his "work of art", something twisted... Ella becomes angry and wants to destroy this thing, but somehow, the "thing" lands on Ms. Shah's womb. She flips/wacks out and leaves the house, the girls and Mr. Shah too...
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Über ein Feedback würde ich mich freuen und Verbesserungsvorschläge nehme ich gerne an! Danke
Summary zu "East ist East" (Film)
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Sorry, aber deine Zusammenfassung hat mich nicht unbedingt überzeugt.
Zunächst fehlt die Einleitung. Kein Mensch weiß, wo sich das ganze abspielt und welche Charaktere es in dem Film gibt. Außerdem hast du einige Grammatikfehler gemacht, wie z.B ganz am Anfang ,,he have to". Es müsste aber heißen ,,he has to" (he, she, it, ein 's' muss mit).
Vielleicht überarbeitest du deinen Text nochmal
Liebe Grüße
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Danke, aber das ist nicht das Summary des ganzen Films, sondern von den letzten Szenen (ok, das hätte ich lieber vorher hinschreiben sollen^^). Mir ist klar, dass mein Englisch nicht so gut ist, und wollte deshalb die Fehler mit evt. Verbesserungstipps bekommen. Wo gibt es denn noch Fehler?
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Deine Summary ist zu detailliert. Konzentrier dich auf die wesentlichen Dinge.
Eine Einleitung musst due auch haben.Versuch es definitiv nohc einmal neu