Englisch Hausaufgaben - Text warum die sprache Englisch wichtig ist

    Hi muss bis morgen einen text abgeben , 12klasse englisch und ich bin nicht so gut. ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen :P
    Hab mich auch schon registriert im Forum wurde aber noch nicht aktiviert...
    Ich wäre dankbar wenn ihr mir verbesserungsvorschläge machen könntet und vllt nach fehlern schaut ;):)


    English is the world language. Therefore it will be very important in my life.
    Today it is necessary to speak English, to communicate with other people from other countries. Especially in good earning jobs it will be provided that I could speak de language well. If I could speak the language very well, I will have better chances for an good job.
    Furthermore I will need the language on vacation. In every country I will go, English will be spoken. Moreover the language will play also an important part in entertainment.
    The most good music songs and films will be in English.
    To improve my English skills, perhaps I will go to America and I will make their my civilian service.
    Consequently the language is very important for a good life

    Liebe grüße Franzi

    Zitat

    English is the world language. Therefore being able to speak it will be very important in my life.
    Today it is necessary to speak English in order to communicate with other people from other countries. Especially in well-paid jobs it will be taken for granted that I [---]speak the language well. If I {---] speak the language very well, I will have better chances for a good job.
    Furthermore I will need the language on vacation. In every country I [---] go, English is spoken. Moreover the language plays[---] an important part in entertainment.
    Most of the good music songs and films are in English.
    To improve my English skills, [---] I will perhaps go to America and I will make their my civilian service. (1)
    Consequently the language is very important for a good life

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    1) there, nicht their - aber: was meinst du?
    Was soll eigentlich das viele "will"?

    fett= korrigiert/eingefügt; [---] = gestrichen

    Flo