hey,
wäre total nett wenn jemand diesen summary berichtigen könnte und mir noch tipps gibt wie ich die sätze schöner gestalten könnte.....
das ist ein summary über die geschichte "a bear problem" im `green line 4`
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On the Gibsons vacation they travel to Kings Canyon National Park. One day the children, Debbie and Rick have gone hiking in the forest and a bear has attacked them. Now the children are save.
On the Gibsons vacation they travel to Kings Canyon National Park. The children, Debbie an Rick, have heared a story about a bear who has attacked a tourist the week before, from the ranger Ed. The next day their parents wants to see the General Grant Tree but the kids thinks that it is boring. And so they have stayed at the campground. Then they have played cards in their motorhome but Debbie has wanted to see the bear but Rick has thought that it is too dangerour. Also they take food with them and go hiking. Suddenly Debbie has screamed that there is the bear but this is only a joke of her. Ricl has been hungry and so the make a stop and have a picnic. One time Debbie looks into the forest behind them and suddenly she screams that there is the bear. But this time it isn´t a joke. Now Rick sees the bear, too. Then the bear goes to them and the children goes a few stappes back. Debbie falls down but she finds a stone and throws it on the bears´s nose. So the bear stops and goes back into the forest. Debbie and Rick run back to the campground. They have a big shock.
