Referat Eng Korrekturlesen bitte

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    Danke!

    Promotion
    At first, I will tell you something about the ideas to promote our product. The main idea are advertisements with different stars and they personal designed "Musik Key". The advertisements will be placed on different locations or in music magazines and internet sites.
    In the future we want make TV advertising with popular popstars like ... . A other idea is, let the people get a chance to try our product. We will accomplish(?) by allot the sticks during different music concerts.
    Lately we've heard something about a company that produce flying hats. Maybe we appoint (anheuern?) some of them to fly arround and make ad's for us.

    das wars....