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  • Hey
    entschuldigt bitte mein schlechtes Englisch aber schreibe morgen eine Arbeit im Fach Englisch und habe dafür mal einen kleinen Text geschrieben wäre nett wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet und den text verbessern könntet. Wie gesagt ist dringend nötig


    Living now or 100 years ago

    Next week the Cebit will start with many new technology. In the last years many modern comforts were developed. This bring me to the question what live was easier, the live now or 100 years ago? In the next part I search arguments for living now and living 100 years ago.

    First of all I think the people who had live in 1910 don’t miss a car or the Internet. They had read ah nice book and they were contented. Further there are many reasons for living 100 years ago, for example the pollution wasn’t very fatal, many things was made from natural products. If I am not mistaken was the unemployment in Germany not so big than now, that’s further a reason for living in the beginning of 20th century .

    But on the other side I must say that the live is easier with the new technology, and the public health is better. And I cannot deny tha new media like the Internet can connect the whole world together. Another significant point is that the security in all areas are better and we can drive long ways fast and safe with the cars, the bus or the airplane.

    In summing up it can be say that the live in the year 2010 easier than be 100 years ago because a lot of technical comforts like the internet or cars make the live easier. And the advance in the medicine is important for the whole live.

  • Next week the Cebit will start with many new technology: ...and many new technologies will be introduced to...

    This bring me to the question what live was easier, the live now or 100 years ago?: This brings me to the question when life was easier, now or 100 years ago.
    (life: das Leben; to live: leben)

    I think the people who had live in 1910 don’t miss a car: ...people who lived in 1910 did not miss cars... ("miss" macht hier keinen Sinn, sie vermissten nichts, was sie nie hatten. Abgesehen davon gab es 1910 schon Autos.)

    many things was made from natural products: many things were made of...

    If I am not mistaken was the unemployment in Germany not so big than now, that’s further a reason: If I'm not mistaken, the unemployment rate in Germany was not as high as now...

    ...beginning of 20th century: ...of the 20th century.

    can connect the whole world together: can connect the whole world.

    security in all areas are better: is better

    drive long ways fast and safe with the cars, the bus or the airplane.:

    ...cars, buses or airplanes.

    In summing up it can be say that the live in the year 2010 easier than be 100 years ago because a lot of technical...

    Ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob in summing up richtig ist, ich habe das noch nie verwendet oder gehört. Wenn du kein Risiko eingehen willst, schreib:

    All in all it can be said that living in the year 2010 is easier than living 100 years ago...

    Du sollest an deinem Stil arbeiten.

    Einmal editiert, zuletzt von Lara (12. März 2010 um 16:24)