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    In the story " Mr.Mumsford" by Larry French, tells us about Ralph Mumsford who is a school janitor and who is called " Bibs". "Bibs" is just his nickname and he disagrees with his nickname. The story presents a conflict between Ralph and the principal.
    One night Ralph comes to school to kill the ptincipal because no one at the school has ever bother to learn his real name including the principal.Ralph just want poeple to know his real name. Ralph tells his problem to the principal and after that they make an agreement.The principal promises him that the teachers will call him by his real name from now on and Ralph won't kill the principal.


    es wäre sehr nett wenn jmd kurz neinen text korrigieren würde
    danke schonmal im voraus.

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    The story " Mr.Mumsford" by Larry French tells us about Ralph Mumsford who is a school janitor and who is called " Bibs". "Bibs" is just his nickname and he disagrees with his nickname(1). The story presents a conflict between Ralph and the principal.
    One night Ralph comes to school to kill the ptincipal (SP) because no one at the school has ever bother(2) to learn his real name including the principal(3).Ralph just want poeple to know his real name. Ralph tells his problem to the principal and after that they make an agreement.The principal promises him that the teachers will call him by his real name from now on and Ralph won't kill the principal.


    es wäre sehr nett wenn jmd kurz neinen text korrigieren würde
    danke schonmal im voraus.


    SP - spelling - Rechtschreibung

    1 - Keine Schöne Formulierung "dissaproves of it" oder "dislikes it" wäre direkter.

    2 - Das Present Perfect wird mit dem Past participle gebildet

    3 - An dieser Stelle ist es etwas schwer zu verstehen, direkt hinter "noone" ist es einfacher.

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