Englisch Korrektur

  • Hallo! Bin mir hier auch überhaupt nicht sicher ob es so richtig ist.
    Kann mir bitte jemand helfen?
    Ich Danke schon jetzt
    LG
    A.

    Please write a story in the past tense. Use eight of the words in the box.
    the actors - very good/bad
    many people - lots of dogs
    in the streets - last week

    to be afraid of - to be fond of
    to dislike - to be shocked
    to leave - bad weather

    Write eight sentences.
    Start like this: Last weekend I was at the theate (cinema)...

    Habe die Sätze so geschrieben:

    Many people are not satisfied.
    The actors in the bad weather in the open air, the play lists.
    In the streets, it was loud.
    Many dogs were on the streets.
    The people were shocked.
    They wanted only to leave your seats.
    Many had a dislike of the lerm.
    It was very good and everybody was glad.
    When the play was over.The bad weather then went over well.

  • They wanted only to leave your seats:
    They only wanted to leave their seats.

    When the play was over.The bad weather then went over well:
    When the play was over the bad weather was over as well, vielleicht?
    Play würde hier Schauspiel bzw. Theaterstück bedeuten.

    Was meinst du mit "lerm"? Lärm, also noise?

    In the streets, it was loud: It was loud in the streets.

    The actors in the bad weather in the open air, the play lists: Hä? Nicht böse gemeint, aber ich verstehe es nicht...Was möchtest du damit sagen?

  • Meintest du mit dem Satz
    The actors in the bad weather in the open air, the play lists.
    vielleicht
    The actors played an open-air concert in bad weather. ?

    Was meinst du denn mit "play lists"?