Hugo of Baskerville!!! Bitte dringends um Hilfe.

Hallo, ich lese gerade in Englisch das Buch
'The Hound of Baskervilles'
Dort wird eine Geschichte von Hugo Baskerville erzählt und unsere Lehrerin möchte von uns das wir die Geschichte in eigenen Worten zusammenfassen.
Hier ist meine Zusammenfassung und ich bin mir nicht wirklich sicher ob ich die richtige Zeit benutz habe. Deswegen bitte ich euch um Hilfe.
Könntet ihr mir auch erklären welche Zeit man genau benutzt?
Großes Dankeschön im Vorraus.

Hugo Baserville was a wild and godless men. He was a wicked man who kidnapped a farmer’s daughter. He and his friends carried her away to Baskerville Hall where they locked her in an upper room. While he was having a drinking spree with his guests, the girl escaped. Hugo was discovered that she was missing, he sent dogs to retrieve her. The friends ran to stop him, they have found the dead bodys of them. Over Hugo has stand a great black animal, it has teared out Hugo Baskerville’s throat.

In the 1650s the Hall of Baskerville was owned by Hugo of Baskerville, who was a wild and godless man. Hugo came to love the daughter of a farmer living near the Hall. But the girl was afraid and would not have him. One night Hugo and his friends rode down to the farm and carried her away. While he was have a drinkging spree with his friends the girl escaped. She climbed out of the window, down the wall and then she ran away homewards across the moor. When Hugo noticed that the girl was away, he swore before all his friends that he would give his body and soul to the Devil if only he could catch the girl again.
He let out his hounds, sprang on his horse and rode out after the girl.
A few minutes later all his friends took horse and started off after Hugo.
Then they found the bodys of them. Dead.
Over Hugo was standing a great black animal it was tearing out Hugo Baskervilles throat.
So remember my sons, that many of the family have been unhappy in their deaths, which have been sudden bloody, and strange. And I must tell you one thing, never cross the moor during the hours of darkness.