Bitte um Korrekturlesung. Sehr wichtig

  • Hey, könntet ihr bitte diese Dialog korriegieren?
    Sehr wichtig, danke im Vorraus.

    Moderator: Welcome to my talkshow. Today we talk about Graffiti. Here are Johny and George. Johny is a sprayer. So Johny, it’s your turn.

    Johny: I think Graffiti is a form of art. It can be very beautiful, when it’s good.

    George: I’m convinced that isn’t a form of art, it’s only scrawl. And it’s illegal.

    Johny: It isn’t always illegal. There are extra facilities for sprayer. They spray graffiti to show what they can. So they want to prove themselves.

    Goerge: Above all we must keep in mind that the state needs to spent much money for it. And that only for the cleaning of buses, walls and subways. That’s incredible.

    Johny: But no one is interested in it, if it's on the walls, buses or trams.
    It bothers no one. It’s only paint.

    Goerge: This money could be usefully invested in other things such as schools or hospitals, but it needs to be spent on cleaning this paint.
    The damage done by graffiti costs hundreds of millions a year. And i think graffiti is only vandalism.

    Johny: But it isn’t dangerous as other illegal things. For example, such as illegal car race.

    Goerge: Yes, your right, but on the other hand, it’s still illegal.

    Johny: But you know that people die from car races. At spraying, no one hurt.

    Goerge: Yes, but i think the main point is that it’s illegal.

    Johny: I see everything from a different point of view as you. To sum up i would say that it’s all his own business.

    Moderator: Thank’s for listening. Goodbye. Until next week.

  • ich würde ganz am anfang anstatt von "Today we talk about Graffiti"
    "today we're talking about Graffiti" schreiben, da sie ja sofort darüber reden werden also present progressive..

    dann hier korrigiert:
    Johny: But it isn’t as dangerous as other illegal things. For example ....

    Goerge: Yes, you're right, but on the other hand, it’s still illegal.