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    We often meet people who say that robots and machines are not necessary.

    On the one hand it’s true that we get less jobs. The reason for that is that robots and machines replace the workers. For example machines do the work in factory faster than an employer. Likewise you lose your ability to use your brain. That is why machines do all for us. For instance to calculate something you use a calculator and not your brain.

    On the other hand I think we have more free time because the robots do for example our housework. Equally they can do jobs that are impossible for us. Taking that as an example we never can build a whole car so fast like a machine.

    All in all I think the machines make our life comfortable. We just lose stupid jobs like factory workers. Therefore we earn a lot of more intelligent people because they begin to learn to get a job. Additionally when you don’t want to lose your brain ability you have then to practice your brain with some exercises.