Hallo,
wir schreiben in 2 Wochen eine Englischarbeit über die Kurzgeschichte Perfect Beauties. Ich bin ich Englisch so ziehmlich eine Null. Könnt ihr mal gucken ob diese Summmary wenigstens Grammatisch einigermaßen korrekt ist?
Laut OpenOffice sind das schon 300 Wörter 0.o. Wir dürfen aber nur 150 schreiben. Jemand Tipps wie das auch kürzer geht?
Perfect Beauties - Inhaltsangabe
The story „Perfect Beauties“ is about a man , named Edddie Lawrence, who know all about Hollywood and the ruler in kind of a shortstory. Eddie Lawrence works for the New Century Studios and he have a own
broadcast. In this broadcast , he talk about stars an their activity. But Eddie is not the man who makes the news. Eddie is only the man who tell the news at the people outside Hollywood. Anytime Eddie notice that all
the news was gossip. That not of this was true. All is make by the ruler Pam Hunt and Bill Hunt. In the past the journalists meet the stars. But than Amanda was killed by a crazy stalker and the stars have only contact about their agents.
So Eddie conclude to make a break an go to holiyday to found out the true. His first stape is in Italy. At Palazzo Rosso.
He want meet Eliza and Brad , the performer of a new movie. But there is not something in their house. All the partys and other activity was gossip. But somone is follow Eddie. Someone want that Eddie is pipe down.
Eddie is kidnappe by his amgios. One day after, Pam come to him and let him go. In the next stap , Eddie go to Paris and Dorset in England. Someone tells that Eddie was hit Brad. But this is gossip.
Pam und Bill invent news for the people outside Hollywood and also they want that Eddie is pipe down.
When Eddie is in Dorset , he obtain a call from a man named Jim Duncen. He prompt him to come to a cave near the studios. The final step to find out the true. But there is not true. Eddie is kidnappe again and no one see him again.
But the story is not true. Perfect Beauties is a scenario by Eddie. In real, Eddie and Pam are friends.
