Englisch Hausaufgabe - Bitte um Hilfe

  • Hallo alle zusammen,

    in Fremdsprachen bin ich echt nicht gut.
    Jetzt haben wir in Englisch die Aufgabe bekommen einen Text über eine bekannte Person unserer Wahl zu sprechen. Ich habe nun also einen Text über Nelson Mandela geschrieben bzw. habe es versucht.
    Es wäre super, wenn Ihr ihn Euch mal anschauen würdet, ob der Text so einigermaßen in Ordnung ist.

    Danke :D

    Nelson was on 18 July 1918 in Mvezo, South Africa born. Mandela was an anti-apartheid activist, before he was president of South Africa. At the age of sixteen years, he came to the Clakebury Institute. He completed his Junior Certificate in two years, instead of the usual three. After the completion of the Institute, he studied at the University of Fort Hare. In his study worked Mandela politically and became a member of the student council. In the coming years, Nelson Mandela fought against anti-apartheid in South Africa. He spent several years in prison. In June 1961 he was sentenced to life imprisonment. In 1990, he was convicted by strong international pressure and the ANC. Today he lives in freedom in his home country of South Africa.
    His struggle, his energy and his strong will make Nelson Mandela to a very important person
    for me.

  • Zitat von Sprachkrüppel

    Danke :D

    Nelson was born in Mvezo, South Africa on 18 July 1918 born. Mandela was  had been an anti-apartheid activist, before he was became president of South Africa. At the age of sixteen years, he came to the Clakebury Institute. He completed his Junior Certificate in two years, instead of the usual three. After the completion of the Institute, He then studied at the University of Fort Hare. In   During his studies worked Mandela worked politically and became a member of the student council. In the coming   following years, Nelson Mandela fought against anti-apartheid in South Africa. He spent several years in prison. In June 1961 he was sentenced to life imprisonment. In 1990, he was convicted by strong international pressure and the ANC. Today he lives in freedom in his home country of South Africa.
    His struggle, his energy and his strong will have made Nelson Mandela to a very important person
    for me.

    Korrekturzeichen: fett = eingefügt bzw. korrigiert rot = gestrichen


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    Flo