An exciting story!

  • hallo wer kann mir helfen? ich soll in english eine spannende geschichte schreiben ( zu freitag). mir fehlt aber noch etwas:

    The scary castle

    One year ago I was with my parents in a museum. It was very boring so I went to a old and scary castle. The wall was broken and the windows too. But I went in. It was very cold. Suddently somebody closed the door. But there were nobody. I was so alone. I opened a door. Behind the door were two vampires. The vampires wanted to kill me! I ran and ran, but I didnt know where. Then I stopped and looked round. There werent vampires butthere were two dragons with two heads. I shout ,Help´!

    so weiter bin ich noch nicht :oops:
    kann mir jemand einen tipp geben wie ich weiter schreiben könnte? Und ihr önnt mir auch sagen ob Fehler in dem text sind! ok vielen dank schon im voraus!! :D