Also ich musste einen Kommentar zu Why do so many students drop out School.
Das hab ich geschrieben, bitte schreibt mir was man besser umformuliren könnnte, schaut auf Rechtsschreibfehler und verbessert den Text.
Es geht um eine weitere Note, da unsere Lehrerin manchmal auf Hausaufgaben Noten gibt.
In many countries is the drop out rate higher as the graduation rate.
Keeping these facts in mind we have to analyze the question why do so many students drop out school.
One reason could be that numerous students have a part-time-job. The implication is they haven’t enough time to revise the subject material and in the lessons they feel themselves tired and lose their concentration.
If these graduates must write an examination they won’t know the answer of the question and get a bad mark. That is a reason why so many students drop out.
Another argument is the students haven’t the necessary basic acknowledge, an don’t know, how they can full the leak. Then fall the persons in a hopeless situation and do nothing for these Subjects.
A bad grade and a bad feeling are the consequences.
I think students who have a part-time-job should show that they have enough free time to learn. And students who are bad in some subjects should not despair because they can learn it if they want this.
Danke im Voraus.
