Zeitungsartikel in Englisch

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    Habe in der Schule eine Hausaufgabe auf, einen kurzen Zeitungsartikel über Major Tom einem Astronauten zu schreiben. Mal abgesehen davon,dass es mir schwer viel etwas aus den Fingern zu saugen, möchte ich euch bitten,mir zu helfen diesen Text zu korrigieren:

    Fate of a hero

    Astronaut Major Tom became a new hero for mankind yesterday, but he unfortunately died. What went wrong? At this morning, twelve o clock Major Tom left the capsule of his space ship and lost at once the connection to ground control station. Before the connection was interrupted, Major Toms last words were: “I think my spaceship knows which way to go, tell my wife I love her very much she knows.” Nobody knows what the first part of his last sentence means to us. Did aliens capture his space ship,what was really happen?
    His family especially his wife just can´t believe what happened to him. The ground control station told her that there is no risk for this projekt. A special group of Ex-astronauts try to find out what went wrong.
    Nobody wants to give us any informations about progress. They want to avoid wrong statements about the mission, because of the space travel opponents and of the family as well. We will inform you immediately, if we get new facts.


    Danke