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    Nowadays many adults says that adolescene is the best time of life and adults often explains that they wish that they can turn back the time . But is that really true? Is adolescene the best time of life?

    First of all, teenager can gain experience because they´re young. There are several reasons for this, one of them is that they can get the second chance when they made a bad decision so they´re not repeating the same mistake twice.
    Another significant point is that teenager have a lot of time to develop their hobby or to make new friends.
    Moreover teenager don´t have many liabilities because their parents supports them. Let me give you an example: When teenager maybe get into trouble their parents help them or when they need somebody to talk to then they can talk with their parents.

    All in all you can say that adolescent is the best time in life or maybe the best period of life because as an adolescent you have a lot of time to find yourself

    Korrekturen:

    • many adults says => adults = Plural, also many adults say; adolescence ; and adults often explains => adults = Plural, also adults explain
    • But is that really true?
    • Is adolescence the best time of life?
    • First of all, teenager can gain experience because they´re young.
    • There are several reasons for this, one of them is that they can get the second chance when they made a bad decision so they´re not repeating the same mistake twice.
    • Another significant point is that teenager have a lot of time to develop their hobby or to make new friends.
    • Moreover teenager don´t have many liabilities because their parents => parents = Plural, also many parentssupport ;them.
    • Let me give you an example: When teenager maybe get into trouble their parents help them or when they need somebody to talk to then they can talk with their parents.
    • All in all you can say that adolescence is the best time in life or maybe the best period of life because as an adolescent you have a lot of time to find yourself

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