Wer kann bitte meine zwei kurzen Briefe korrekturlesen?

  • Hallo,

    ich wär sehr dankbar wenn jemand die zwei kurzen Texte korrekturlesen würde! Vielen Dank im voraus.

    Dear Mr. Smith

    Offer

    We are pleased to hear that you are interested in our product. Enclosed you will find our latest catalog and price list.Our usual terms of payment are strictly net by the 15th of the month following the month of delivery. We would request payment by bank transfer. Our offer is valid until 15 April. We can offer a 2% cash discount for payment within 10 days. Please note that our product come with a three-year warranty.

    We look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours faithfully

    We saw your advertisement for the new Z-Phone in the „Mobile Magazine“ of 15 March.
    We are a young and rapidly growing retailer who specialize in selling mobile phones.Since we want to expand our range, we plan to import 8,000 units of your high quality mobile phones.Could you please send us more information about the performance of the phone?We would be grateful for information on your prices, discounts, and your terms of payment.We look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours sincerely

    • Please note that our product come => entweder our products (Plural) come oder our product (Singular) comes
    • We are a young and rapidly growing retailer who specialize => a young and rapidly growing retailer who specializes (Singular) oder ... is specialized


    Der Rest ist ok