Wer kann mein Skript korrekturlesen?

  • Hallo,

    englisch war noch nie meine Stärke. Kann jemand bitte das Skript korrekturlesen? Vielen Dank.

    Mr. X: Boss Mobile, Mr. X speaking, how can I help you?

    Mr.Y: Hello Mr.X this is Mr. Y from GL Mobile. We received your enquiry and we would like
    to make a offer.

    Mr.X: Great! What can you offer us?

    Mr.Y: We can offer a 5% quantity discount for orders over 8,000 units. We can also offer a 2% cash discount for payments within 10 days.

    Mr.X: Sounds good! What are your terms of payment?

    Mr.Y: We prefer payments by bank transfer. The payment should be made within 30 days.

    Mr.X: Okay. Could you please tell me again from which amount the quantity discount is valid?

    Mr.Y: The quantity discount is valid for orders over 8,000 units.

    Mr.X: Great! We would like to order 8,000 units.

    Mr.Y: Nice to hear that. We send immedialtely a offer with all details we discussed. Your contact details are known to me.

    Mr.X: Thank you for calling and goodbye

    Mr.Y: Thank you, you too bye.

    • Mr.Y: Hello Mr.X this is Mr. Y from GL Mobile. We received your enquiry and we would like to make an offer.
    • Mr.Y: We may offer a 5% quantity discount for orders over 8,000 units, and also a a 2% cash discount for payments within 10 days.
    • Mr.X: Okay. Could you please tell me again for which amount the quantity discount is valid?
    • Mr.Y: That sounds good. We will immediately send you an offer with all details we discussed. Your contact details are known to me.


    Die restlichen Sätze sind ok, daher nicht mehr ins Antwortfeld reingenommen.