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  • Hallo
    ich bin leider nicht so gut in Englisch und wollte wissen ob diese Aufgaben richtig sind.

    Guy Fawkes Night

    5th November is a very special date for British children. During the day they go to a school as normal and their parents got to work but in the evening something very exciting happens:they celebrate Guy Fawkes night.

    Guy Fawkes was found in the cellars of the Houses of Parliament on the evening of November 4th, 1605, with 36 barraels oof gunpowder. He and some other men planned to blow up the building when King James I opened parliament the next day. Luckily he was stopped and a lot of lives were saved.

    British people celebrate this with a bonfire and fireworks. This is sometimes done in private gardens but a lot of people go to organised events where professionals are responsible for the fireworks. It is tradition for children to make a "guy " , a model of Guy Fawkes,out of old clothes which are filled with newspaper.This "guy" is then put on the top of the bonfire and burnt. Sometimes children go around town days before bonfire night with their creation and ask for "a penny for the guy". This money is then used to buy fireworks.

    Food plays a big role, too. Homemade toffee and ginger cake are typical things on the menu but baked potatoes and sausages are often cooked on the fire.At public firework displays hamburgers and hot dogs are also sold.

    Fireworks can of course be extremely dangerous. For this reason the fire service are always at public displays and children are taught how to use fireworks carefully.They know that they must follow the instructions on the box and that they should keep their fireworks in a closed box and never put them in their pockets or throw them. Dogs and cats and other pets are always kept inside as they could et very frightened.

    Children,however,love that special atmosphere that is created on Guy Fawkes night when you can hear the crackling of bonfires and see the wonderful colours that are produced by the fireworks.

    Beantworten sie die Fragen
    Aufgabe A

    1.When is Guy Fawkes night celebrated ?
    A:The guy fawkes night shall celebrated at the 5th night .

    2.What nearly happened in 1605 ?
    A:Guy Fawkes and some other men planned to blow up the building when King James I opened parliament the next day.

    3.Where do British people celebrate Guy Fawkes night ?
    A:British people celebrate the Guy Fawkes night in private gardens or events.

    4.What is a "guy" ?
    A:A guy is a model of Guy Fawkes with old clothes which are filled with newspaper.

    5.Why do children make "guys" ?
    A:The children make this "guys" about to go around town days before bonfire night with their creation and ask for "a penny for the guy". This money is then used to buy fireworks.


    6.What food do people prepare themselves for Guy Fawkes night ?
    A:Typical foods are homemake toffe,ginger cake, baked potatoes and sausages.

    7.What sort of food can people buy ?
    A:Hamburgers and hot dogs can buy at the guy fawkes night.

    8.Why are public firework displays maybe safer than private celebrations ?
    A:Publice fireworks displays are safer.

    9.What do children learn to do ?
    A:Children lern fireworks use carefull.

    10.Where do pets spend Guy Fawkes night ?
    A:The pets stayed at home

    Setzen sie die folgenden Sätze ins Passiv.
    Aufgabe B

    1.British children spend a lot of money on fireworks.
    Passiv:A lot of money is spent on fireworks by British children.

    2.Guy Fawkes bought a lot of gunpowder.
    Passiv:A lot of gundpowder was bought by Fawkes.

    3.They caught Guy Fawkes in time.
    Passiv:Guy Fawkes was caught in time

    4.James I opened parliament on November 5th, 1605.
    Passiv:Parliament was opened by James on November 5th 1605.

    5.Someone always invites our neighbours to a private bonfire party.
    Passiv:Our neighbours are always invited to a private bonfire party by someone.

    6.We didn`t buy the wood for the bonfire last year.
    Passiv:Last year the wood for our bonfire wasn't bought by us.

    7.You see children with their "guys" in the city centre.
    Passiv:In the city centre children with their "guys" were seen.

    8.Professionals organise public firework displays.
    Passiv:Public firework displays were are organized by professionals.

    Füllen sie die Lücken mit einem passenden Wort.

    Aufgabe C

    1. I don`t think bonfires are a good idea
    They are bad for the pets

    2.
    Wind power is a sustainable form of energy.

    3.
    She had an accident and crash her car.

    4.
    Our plane is late. I`ve just heard an message.

    5.
    What time does the plane arrive ?
    At 12.45 and we land at 1.15 local time.

    6.
    I`m in a terrible hurry. Could you please do me a favor and stop by at the supermarket for some milk ?

    7.
    He`s forgotten her address. Can you please repeat him ?

    8.
    The food in this resturant is exellent but the service is terrible.

    9.
    The plane couldn`t fly because of a technical defective.

    10.
    They are leaving their own country and going to live foreign countries at the end of the year.

    Einen Freund einladen um Thanksgiving zu feiern und ihn um hilfe beten.
    Aufgabe D

    Hello Marcel,
    I want you to invite me to come with Thanksgiving celebrate.
    When come you must help you me
    The party organize in my garden you have to help me decorate and with the cooking.
    I imagined eating there with turkey with potatoes and vegetables.
    As dessert an apple pie with cream.
    Drinks are beer water and juices, lemonade
    For evening there then even champagne and finger food
    Family and friends and old school friends to comes.
    The party shall great.
    Would be glad if you come

    best regards
    Kevin

    Ich wäre sehr dankbar dafür

    Mit freundlichen grüßen
    Kevin

  • Beantworten sie die Fragen
    Aufgabe A

    1. A:The Guy fawkes night is celebrated on 5 November.

    2. A:Guy Fawkes and some other men planned to blow up the Houses of Parliament when King James I opened it the next day.

    5. A: The children make this "guys" and go around town days before bonfire night with their creation and ask for "a penny for the guy". This money is then used to buy fireworks.

    6. A:Typical foods are homemade toffee and ginger cake, baked potatoes and sausages.

    7. A: People can buy Hamburgers and hot dogs at guy fawkes night.

    8. A: Public firework displays maybe safer because the fire service is always there.

    9. A: Children learn to use fireworks carefully and read and follow the instructions on the box.

    10. A: The pets are kept inside their homes.


    Setzen sie die folgenden Sätze ins Passiv.
    Aufgabe B

    1.British children spend a lot of money on fireworks.
    Passiv:A lot of money is spent on fireworks by british children.

    6.We didn`t buy the wood for the bonfire last year.
    Passiv:Last year the wood for our bonfire wasn't bought/has not been bought by us.

    7.You see children with their "guys" in the city centre.
    Passiv:In the city centre children with their "guys" are seen.

    8.Professionals organise public firework displays.
    Passiv:Public firework displays are organized by professionals.

    Füllen sie die Lücken mit einem passenden Wort.
    Aufgabe C
    Welche Lücken sollten da befüllt werden?
    Den Brief muss ich mir erst mal anschauen und ihn verdauen. Der ist so grottenschlecht...

  • Hallo danke für die Antwort .
    Nur hätte ich eine Frage wegen dem Brief kannst du mir Tipps geben wegen Rechtschreibung und so.

    Bei Aufgabe C wurde das nicht in den Post übernommen .
    1. I don`t think bonfires are a good idea
    They are bad for the ________

    2.
    Wind power is a_______ form of energy.

    3.
    She had an accident and _______ her car.

    4.
    Our plane is late. I`ve just heard an ________.

    5.
    What time does the plane __________ ?
    At 12.45 and we land at 1.15 local time.

    6.
    I`m in a terrible hurry. Could you please do me a _______ and stop by at the supermarket for some milk ?

    7.
    He`s forgotten her address. Can you please __________ him ?

    8.
    The food in this resturant is exellent but the _______ is terrible.

    9.
    The plane couldn`t fly because of a technical _______.

    10.
    They are leaving their own country and going to live ______________ at the end of the year.


    1. I don`t think bonfires are a good idea
    They are bad for the pets

    2.
    Wind power is a sustainable form of energy.

    3.
    She had an accident and crash her car.

    4.
    Our plane is late. I`ve just heard an message.

    5.
    What time does the plane arrive ?
    At 12.45 and we land at 1.15 local time.

    6.
    I`m in a terrible hurry. Could you please do me a favor and stop by at the supermarket for some milk ?

    7.
    He`s forgotten her address. Can you please repeat him ?

    8.
    The food in this resturant is exellent but the service is terrible.

    9.
    The plane couldn`t fly because of a technical defective.

    10.
    They are leaving their own country and going to live foreign countries at the end of the year.

  • 3. She had an accident and crashed her car.

    4. Our plane is late. I`ve just heard an announcement (Durchsage).

    5. What time does the plane take off?
    At 12.45 and we land at 1.15 local time.

    6. I`m in a terrible hurry. Could you please do me a favor and stop by at the supermarket for some milk ?

    7. He`s forgotten her address. Can you please tell/write him ?

    9. The plane couldn`t fly because of a technical error oder defect.

    10. They are leaving their own country and going to live abroad at the end of the year.


    Hinsichtlich der Einladung schreib sie doch bitte mal in vernünftigem Deutsch hier hinein.

    Einmal editiert, zuletzt von Fluffy (9. Juni 2014 um 21:51)

  • Danke das dur mir hilfst hier so in der Art wollte ich dehn Brief auf Englisch haben.

    Hallo Marcel,
    ich wollte dich gerne einladen zum Thanksgiving Fest am 27.11.2014
    Du kannst gerne Gäste mitbringen nur sage vorher Bitte bescheid.
    Alte Schulkollegen werden auch da sein es werden viele Gäste erwartet.
    Wenn es dir nichts ausmacht dann helfe mir bitte bei den Vorbereitungen.
    Zum Essen gibt es Truthahn mit Kartoffeln und Gemüse, als Dessert gibt es einen Apfelkuchen.
    An Getränke gibt es Wasser,Saft und Bier
    Zum Abend gibt es Sekt und Fingerfood.

    Mit freundlichen Grüßen

    Kevin

    Da ich erst wieder mit dem Englischen Anfange wollte ich noch Wissen was man Allgemein bei einem Brief oder Einladung auf Englisch zu beachten hat , wenn ein Ereignis noch Passieren wird.Komm mit der Grammatik durcheinander.

  • Hello Marcel,
    I would like to invite you to the Thanksgiving feast on 27/11/2014
    You are welcome to bring guests just let me know in time
    Old School colleagues will also be there; many guests are expected.
    If you do not mind please help me with the preparations.
    For dining there is turkey with potatoes and vegetables, as a dessert we will have an apple pie.
    At drinks water, juice and beer will be served an in the late evening we plan to offer champagne and finger food.