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    When I think about the USA, I always associate big country with a lot of chances to live your dreams. Another thing is when I think about the USA, is there having so many people from all over the world and everybody lives in freedom there. The USA is very famous for the unhealthy food, but Donates or French fairs are very good and I like it, but the best thing in the USA is the penatbutter or the Burgers.
    I also think about the big nature like Florida with the crocodiles or in north with the Rocky Mountains. I have never been in the Rocky Mountains but I will do it ones in my life.
    Further I link with the USA, the city New York, with lots of sights and hundreds of shops like Victoria Secret. Another reason why I want to the USA is that I will fly to Los Angles, San Francisco and Las Vegas. In Las Angles I will see the Road drive with the stars from the famous actors or musicians.
    The negative things when I think about the USA are there are fat or unhealthy people. Some people have too much many than they destroy their own bodies with plastic operation