Bitte Korriegiren(Ein Tagesbericht)

  • Ich brauch dringend eure Hilfe!Wir sollen einen Bericht über unseren Praktikumsplatz schreiben,und der ist 50% unseres Tests.
    So mein Text:

    A Typical working day

    From September 8th to September 26th.
    J did my workexperience in the!Bürgertreff-Marl" in Marl.
    Every morning J started at 10.00 a.m except on Thursdays then I started at 9 o´clock in the morning,because every Thursday we had a norious big breafast at 10.00a.m with a lot of people and for all people.I always worked to 6 p.m.So I worked 8hours a day and just on Thursdays 9hours.My break was different, sometimes two hours and someties one our half an hour,depending if we had something to do or not.My tasks often were to play with children in different groups.
    I always made coffee and sometimes iI talked with people about their problems.I had to be very friendly, because J mostly met a lot of different people and I was really good.Sometimes I had to be very patient,because the children often began to cy or to do bad things.I was allowed to cook with the children.It was really cool.During my work experience I worked with three other people. But often other people from the youthservice came or people who only worked some hours.So that was my amazing work experience.


    Danke :lol:

  • Hallo
    big breafast = big breakfast
    somties = sometimes
    cy = cry

    Versuch noch ein paar andere Wörter für: people, sometimes und work zu finden. Ich weiss wird ein bisschen schwierig sollte aber möglich sein.

    mfg
    Siggi