Hallo Englischexperten!
Ich brauche unbedingt eure Hilfe. Für Englisch soll ich ein Bild beschreiben und analysieren.
Hier ein Link zu dem Bild, genauer gesagt ist es eine Momentaufnahme aus dem Film „Eastis East“.
http://outnow.ch/Movies/1999/EastIsEast/Bilder/movie.fs/07
Nun habe ich mein bestes gegeben um eine umfangreiche Analyse und Beschreibung zu verfassen. Leider ist mein Englisch nicht das Beste. Könntet ihr vielleicht den Text nach Fehlern kontrollieren? Und vielleicht habt ihr ja auch weitere Tipps was ich umschreiben sollte, oder was noch dazu gehört. Würde so gerne einen Text haben mit dem ich in der Schule glänzen kann. Das wäre wirklich sehr, sehr lieb!
I choose the sixth still which was taken in the eleventh minute at the movie “East is East”. It is a very sentimental snapshoot. I give the still the title “Hopeless love”.
At this still are two persons, a man and a woman in an age of 20 till 25 years. The man looks like a Moslem or Hindu, with tanned skin and dark hair. His clothes look traditional. The woman looks like a European, with bond shoulder-length hair and bright skin. Her clothes look modern. The man embraces the woman; his right hand touches her back neck. Her left hand touches his neck. Their looks cross each other. They look deep in the eyes of the opponent. Their position looks intimately and full of love. They look like a couple. Their looks and facial expressions can tell the watcher more about their relationship, their feelings and the situation. Both persons look unlucky in love, their looks are sad, desperate, but full of hope.
The atmosphere is very intensive, maybe depressed, unhappy, sad, but also romantic and full of love and emotions. Maybe the reason of the depress atmosphere are the different cultures, violations of culture standards, and families which can’t understand this abnormal love.
The couple might be thinking about each other, the emotional moment, their love and their future at this moment. I think both are totally concentrate of their partner and their feelings. Possibly it will be the last meeting of this couple, and the end of the relationship, because they bend their religions and families.
