Email schreiben auf Englisch !!

  • Hey ! Wir sollen in Englisch eine Email schreiben, und ich wollte euch fragen was für Vorschläge und Verbesserungen ihr dazu hättet. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar !!! Es geht um zwei Events die ich beschreiben sollte.

    Hey,
    The first event is the T-hall. The T-hall is a place where you can climb, but it is not a problem if you can not climb, because there are a lot of courses with professional trainers who will teach and help you. The T-hall is very big, about 1800 m2, so you have a lot of place to climb. What I like very much is that there are about 200 routes, but not only for the beginners. There are also very demanding routes for the advanced climbers. I think we will have a lot of fun there.

    The second event is the Berlin Underworld Museum. It is not a normal museum, because there are guided tours through underground buildings. These tours are on different places in the city, but you can reach it easily by traffic. The tours take place in interesting buildings, so that we certainly will not be bored. But it is important, that you bring warm clothes with you because it is very cold there. Because the tours are available in different languages, we can make one in english so that you understand everything.

    I hope you look forward to these events like me.

    Jana

  • Hey, (sehr informell, daher besser: Hello,)

    (klein weiter: the) first event (will take place in the T-hall). The T-hall is a place where you can climb(. Even if you're not able to climb yet, with the help of professional trainer you can learn to do so. They will teach and help you.)

    The T-hall is (huge, it is) about 1800 m2, so you have a lot of place to climb. What I like (best) is that there are about 200 (possible trails), raging from beginners to advanced climbers). There are also very demanding (trails) for the advanced climber. I think we will have a lot of fun there.

    The second event (will be) the Berlin Underworld Museum. It is not a normal museum, because there are guided tours through underground buildings. These tours are on different places in the city, but you can reach it easily by (train?: traffic = Verkehr / Öffentliche Verkehrsmittel = public transportation). The tours take place in interesting buildings, so that we certainly will not be bored. (Make sure) you bring warm clothes(, as) it is very cold there. Because the tours are available in different languages, (you will be able to listen to the English guide, so you don't have to be afraid to not understand something).

    I hope (you're looking) forward to (the upcoming events just as much as I do)!

    Best wishes, (oder auch kind regards (formeller) oder love (wenn du die person kennst und magst)
    Jana


    Sehr gut! :)