Korrektur bitte! :)

  • Hallo,
    wir sollten in Englisch einen Text über unseren Sport schreiben und hier ist das Ergebnis:
    My talk is about riding. Many people say it isn't a real kind of sport. But the Challenge of this sport is
    to work and communicate with your horse
    Riding is performance sport and not so easy as many people think.
    It requires balance, body feeling, concentration and confidence.
    With the horse riding are coached the stomach muscles, the back musculature the legs and the arms and shoulders.
    There are many different kinds of riding. Example: Leisure Riding, Western Riding, Dressage, jumping, eventing, vaulting and many others.
    But before you start to ride, you have to clean the horse.
    The most important things are: Striegel, Kardätsche, Hufkratzer, Schweißmesser, Mähnenkamm and Wurzelbürste. ( extra auf Deutsch)
    The cleaning is important for the health and the cleanliness.
    I like riding because I love horses and it is funny and it will never be boring.

    Ich würde mich über eine Korrektur und über Verbesserungsvorschläge (müssen auch nicht Grammatik und Rechtschreibung betreffen ;D)freuen.
    Danke schon mal :D!

  • My talk is about riding. Many people say it is not a real kind of sport. But the challange of this sport is to work and to communicate with your horse. Riding is a performance sport and its not easy as some people think.
    It requires balance, body feeling, concentration and confidence. By riding a horse, you coach the stomach muscles, the back musculature, the legs and arms, also the shoulders.
    There are many diffrent kinds of riding. For example: Leisure Riding, Western Riding, Dressage, jumping, eventing or vaulting. The most important things are: " - - "
    The cleaning is important for the health and the spruceness.
    I like riding because I love horses, its fun to ride them. It never gets boring.

    Ich habs mal bisschen korrigiert, ich denke so ist es wesentlich richtiger :)