Bitte um Korrektur, kurzer Text Thema Retirement

  • Könnte jemand bitte den Text korrigieren? Das Thema ist: "wie kann man (in Amerika) die Rente finanzieren".

    Retirement is a big Problem for many Americans. Many people cannot afford to retire because they do not have enough monney to finance their retirement. I will point out some possibilities how you can finance your retirement better.
    First of all it's important to save money for your retirement and you should start to save early. Secondly, you can invest your money in stocks or funds. Thirdly, you can take out an insurance. For example a health insurance is important because it bears the medical expenses in your retirement. A further alternative is emigration to another country, for example a country which offers a state pension bill.
    In conclusion I have to say that there are many opportunities to finance your retirement life.