bitte um korrektur, bin nicht gerade gut in englisch...

  • Man learns perfect Italian in two hours

    On the 14th September 2007, a men went to his work like the other days. But this working day it happened something. He became his real dream job, but the problem was, the job was in Italy. Johnny can’t speak Italian, he was really bad in languages in his school.
    So he came back from his work and he called his friend Peter who learned 4 years Italian, if he can help him to learn the language. He said yes, but peter can’t come tomorrow. Johnny went to bed and he was saying to himself: “Please god, please. I can speak Italian, I can!”
    On the next day he must fly in the evening to Italy for a meeting. He was really exciting. When he arrived, all the peoples spoke Italian and nobody spoke English. He thought: “Oh no! What I am doing now?” he called peter that he can help him during the meeting. So peter translated him the words that Johnny’s colleagues were saying and what Johnny want to talk back. This was going on for one week.
    But one day Johnny said: “No, I must learn Italian!” Peter was coming to help him. They learned one hours and Johnny want give up, but they learned one hours more. Johnny was so desperate that he can’t speak Italian.
    On the next day he went to a meeting with the Italian people. And at this meeting he want give up the job and say that he can’t speak Italian. But as they were speaking he understand what they say and he tried to answer. And it happened the best moment in his life, he can speak Italian. He can’t get it and called his friend and they were saying that this is an unsolved mystery, because he learned only two hours and he didn’t understand anything.

  • ich möchte jetzt nicht deine sätze ändern und weis jetz auch nicht in welchem jahrgang du bist, deswegen korregiere ich nur sehr wenig:

    On (the) 14th September 2007, a men went to his work like the other days. But DURING HIS WORK it happened something. He GOT his real dream job, but the problem was, the job was in Italy. Johnny can’t speak Italian, he was really bad in languages in his school.
    So he came back from his work and he called his friend Peter who learned 4 years Italian, TO ASK HIM WHETHER HE COULD help him to learn the language. He said yes, but peter can’t come tomorrow. Johnny went to bed and he was saying to himself: “Please god, please. I can speak Italian, I can!”
    On the next day he must fly in the evening to Italy for a meeting. He was really exciting. When he arrived, all the peoples spoke Italian and nobody spoke English. He thought: “Oh no! What I am doing now?”. THEN he called peter TO ASK HIM WHETHER he can help him during the meeting. So peter translated him the words that Johnny’s colleagues were saying and what Johnny want to talk back. This was going on for one week.
    But one day Johnny said: “No, I must learn Italian!” Peter was coming to help him. They learned one hours and Johnny want give up, but they learned one hours more. Johnny was so desperate that he can’t speak Italian.
    On the next day he went to a meeting with the Italian people. And at this meeting he wantS TO give up the job and say that he can’t speak Italian. But as they were speaking he understand what they say and he tried to answer. And it happened the best moment in his life, he can speak Italian. He can’t get it and called his friend and they were saying that this is an unsolved mystery, because he learned only two hours and he didn’t understand anything.

    Einmal editiert, zuletzt von hope (13. Mai 2013 um 13:01)

  • Ich habe zwar keine Ahnung von Englisch, aber ich tippe mal, dass du den Text im Past Tense schreiben solltest. Die Zeitformen hast du nicht durchgehalten, sondern springst munter hin und her.