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  • Ein fliegender Arzt in Australien


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    Der Text

    Hi, my name`s John and I work as a flying doctor fort he Flying Doctor Service in Australia. I`ve worked here for fifteen years in a big hospital in Brisbane, but that wasn`t as exciting as this job.

    About ten percent of the Australian population live in the Outback – that means in places far away from towns an cities. The Flying Doctor Service was started in Queensland in 1928 by another John
    -John Flynn, who people called Flynn of the medical service for people who couldn`t esily get to doctors or hospitals. It only became possible, of course, woth the development of aeroplanes and radio technology.

    We have a regular service and an emergency service. The regular service means that we fly out on a fixed date to a certain place and people can come to us with their medical problems. The emergency service is for when something unexpected happens. We get a call and we have to go to a certain place as quickly as possible. Before the Service started, many people died because there was no medical help.

    Today we have over 50 aircraft in 22 different place, and we fly about 60,000 kilometers a year. Since the 1940s, women have worked for the service, at first as nurses, and now as doctors and pilots, too. There isn`t really such a thing as a normal day. We have a 24- hour service, so I sometimes work early, sometimes late and sometimes all night. And we never know what the day will bring – that`s one of the reasons I love my job.


    Die Zusammenfassung

    In the text, A flying doctor in Australia, it's about a doctor who flies in Australia to people who are not so easily accessible. It's about a doctor named John, he work at Flying Doctor Service for 15 years, he started with 30 in this company. Previously, he has worked in a large hospital in Brisbane.
    Etwa zehn Prozent der australischen Bevölkerung leben im Outback - das heißt an Orten weit entfernt von Städten und Gemeinden. The Flying Doctor Service was founded in 1928. For the doctors, it has become much easier. Whereas the development of the aircraft and wireless technology, which has improved dramatically.
    Service consists of 2 hire once the maintenance, the equipment, etc, and the emergency services. When it comes to the emergency rescue of people, because doctors need to be placed very rapidly, and this is not said lightly. As this service is not yet announced, Died many people because they do not bekommen Medizinische supply. This service has now more than 50 aircraft, locations in 22 Different, and flying about 6000 km per year, which is a very large amount. Women may also work since the 1940s in the service, but it was only as a nurse, and later even as a doctor and a pilot. John has sometimes early work a night shift or get it over with, they are still gefähllt him the job. And he never knows what brings the job, so he likes the job well.


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  • Hey,

    habe den Text eben einmal kurz überflogen. Ich finde, dass dieser sehr gut gelungen ist, habe zwei kleinere Fehler gefunden. Aber Du schreibst sehr detailliert und erklärst viel, das gefällt u.a. auch meinen Lehrern immer :)