Hallo ihr 
Ich bitte um eure Hilfe. Wir sollen für die Schule eine eigene Geschichte schreiben. Hab ich natürlich auch getan. Da ich nicht so der beste in Englisch bin, bitte ich euch diese mal zu korrigieren.
Vielen Dank schon mal!
A good friend is thinking of you
I woke up and opened my eyes
“Fuck where I am”
I realized that I am at home in my bed. I was at a party with my best friend.
“Where he is? And what the hell happened last night?!”
So I called my buddy, but he didn’t answered.
I sat on my couch start very despair and start thinking.
“Shit…”
It tooks hours and no one answered, so I picked up my phone book and looked for his name,
Maybe someone from his family knows where he is
“Hello here is Max, do you Know Paul?” – “No”
“Hello here is Max,…..” –“No”
“Hello….” – “no”
This went on for the next 2 hours, so I became a new idea.
I researched on the internet, while I discovered an empty bottle of Vodka on my table.
“Oh no, this damn alcohol!”
I remembered something and reflected further
“Shit, I let him drive home with the car….”
Immediately I putted my fingers to the keyboard and searched some news from today.
I clicked on a link.
“It just cannot be true!”
Thick and fat in the headline – “Paul K. – Raced dead”
I grabbed at my head
“Please let it be not my Paul … please”
I saw the accident happened is not far from here
“I must go there immediately.”
I took my jacket and start sprinting
I ran as fast as I can
Arrived at the accident, there are flowers
And a letter “Paul, we miss you!”
I saw a picture of Paul, my Paul
“No … why .. why Paul”
I sat in front of the candles, and sit there for several hours.
Later, after I was at home, I went back to but a candle and a Letter
“A good friend is thinking of you”